on the death of the family dog by David LaBounty
and maybe
our shared
grief will
bring us back
together
and maybe
she will
say that
I know
it’s been
a year
but perhaps
we could
try again
and I
would come
back home
triumphant
like a
fallen king
returning
from exile,
carrying
loads of
laundry
my ex-wife
knows
nothing
about
the laundry
filling
both of
my empty
hands
June 26, 2011 at 10:33 pm
Nothing I love better than a short poem that rips your heart out. My compliments to Mr. LaBounty.
June 26, 2011 at 10:59 pm
You speak raw and true….as is your gift.
July 8, 2011 at 12:02 pm
wonderful poem david. its sparcity doesn’t mean emptyness of meaning or blandness in feeling. they always take the animals too….
so throwing with dirty laundry would suit her fine. in the mean time,this poem says this with such more refinement.