precipice by Susan Nelson
i’m having those feelings again …the ones i thought you’d killed when you tried to beat the spirit straight out of me…the ones I’ve worked my ass off to make sure i’d never feel again since they never led anywhere worth being. but they’re stealing back and they’re going to take what they want anyway. i’ve got that tug in my belly all warm and delicious and undeniable ‘cause by now it won’t make one bit of difference what my head or my mama tells me to do.
leaning into the echo
i drop
the other shoe
May 23, 2013 at 6:49 pm
So very good, Susan. You voice feelings for a lot if us in this poem.
May 29, 2013 at 4:14 pm
Perfect expression. Thanks for this, Susan.
Winnie
May 30, 2013 at 6:23 pm
thanks!
June 2, 2013 at 7:13 am
I’m very pleased to see this piece published, Susan. I so enjoy reading your work and, often, find myself relating to your poems and experiences.
June 2, 2013 at 12:25 pm
love it!
June 2, 2013 at 9:16 pm
@ Curtis…well now… 🙂 you damn sure ought to 🙂
June 4, 2013 at 6:41 am
many layers deep……love it
June 4, 2013 at 8:35 am
reading between the lines on this one!