Burnt Early Evening by Tom Hatch

Hi she said don’t
I get a kiss, oh sure I pecked
Peck alcoholic I said,
The flower pots got knocked over by
The rain she said
Was it the wind or
The rain I said
The rain came down
In sheets didn’t you see the
Rain knocked over everything
She said, I was 50
Miles away in the city
I don’t know I said,

And don’t put your
Umbrella on the silk carpet
She said, it is only
Damp at the top
I said, then I said
It was good enough for
Your dog to take a
Shit on that you told me
To clean up,

I cleaned it as I
Heard a giggling girl in my
Son’s room that he met
At the restaurant
Where he washes dishes
His first job

The thunder and lightning
Starts again the dog shit comment
Made the rain
Heavily drooping all her flowers

The gutters are overflowing
She said, I saw a stick up there
You never do anything did you
Clean them out she said
I cleaned them I said
Hearing the young girl in my son’s
Room above squealing with an orgasm

6 Responses to “Burnt Early Evening by Tom Hatch”

  1. H have to say, this doesn’t make a hell of a lot of sense, sounds like the dog crapped on her carpet, but I’m glad the girl had an orgasm. Sounds like the kid can do more than wash dishes and already has a head start on handling the females better than his dad.

  2. The guy had years of practice to get to that point. He started out like his son as as we all do. Took him four and a half decades to perfect his cowardice. He told me he was a survivalist. Not really a head start when the old man is old and the young man is young.
    Thx for the comment

  3. U r both right. he was married 4 times and I know I am the 4th. I bought the tibetan rugs for us. It was a gesture of love. have no idea why any man would complain.

  4. OOPs the 2nd comment was from Tom…what r u talking about hotdog???

  5. Sorry I don’t start out like my son!!! U know women read this too! LOL.

  6. Yes!!! the first comment is hopeful but the sone DOES NOT haave a eter grasp..he is my son and is only 19..so HOPEFULLY he will have a better mentor. He needs to be a gentleman and be kind and loving, and a woman the same. love to all.

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